剧本

梗概

时间线

原始的交流

0. 绘图 符号
1. 使用原始语言
2. 使用文字

近代技术

0. 制纸，印刷
1. 电报 电话
2. 无线电

现代通讯

0. 网络通信
1. ar vr

地点

人物

一男一女，不同的‌时间，不同的‌身份。 相同的‌交流内容

洞穴人

狩猎者/采果者

因为连语言的无法顺利沟通，狩猎者只能用食物来表达爱慕的情绪。

男拎兔子，乌拉哇啦
女接兔子，点头，😊，包扎

渔民

女给男贝壳，上有太阳。
太阳转场

农民/纺织者

接太阳）女给男衣服，上有字

文艺复兴，诗人

鹅毛笔，写信

作家/设计师

印了一本书 / 一个版画，上有全家肖像

近代）学生

钢笔，情书

工人

电话亭，接电话
转场：拿到耳边 黑屏 拿开 接下一场景

交流过程

我们的故事线

爱

• 有好感
• 开始沟通
• 深入了解
• 表白
• 异地交流
• 争执
• 心灵上的沟通

爱与战争

• 有好感
• 有敌意
• 表白
• 开战
• 思恋，写信
• 恐惧，写信
• 争执（错误的交流
• 更多的交流
• 和解

Discuss: choose a topic

In my expectation, Love and War would be the topic in the communication. And I want to use Two story at first, then they will concentrate. It will show the influence of war.

When we discuss this idea, my collaborator said, the reason of war is hard to be expressed by communication. In my view, conflict and war could be caused by false communication, so the communication in love and war would have common point. But, the reason of war could be influenced by many aspects, not only communication.

Furthermore, in this project, we have not too much time, so we should limit the quantity of work. If we talk about war, we will use more time on contrast / influence between two points, that would be complicated, and easy to make audience be confused.

So we will talk about Love only in animated illustration

Storyboard

begin

0. black, (purl 水声)
1. close-up Sun => rabit’s eye
2. boy is taking the rabit
3. black, authors

Communicate in early stage

1. he give a rabit to her => she smile (shy), lower her head => black
2. Title (Crash on stone)
3. she engrave on stone (Two person walking under sunshine) => close-up the painting
4. painting became real => He saying something to her (with love and dazzling eyes)(she cant understand)
5. she say ‘You are my Suunn’, point to sun, he repeat, ‘sun’ => look sun
6. sun => become character, on different medium. (stone,bamboo,fur,paper)(words are increaing) => become a complete poem.
7. poem => She use quill(羽毛笔) to write inscription (落款) => close up
8. close-up inscription => he completed by a polish pen => prepare a sealing wax(火漆蜡)=> print, close up, black

They are in love

1. black => (clank自行车铃铛声)=> (creak 金属摩擦声) eyes,she opends the cap of mailbox => (louder creak)close, black
2. face,open again (a letter in mailbox loom 隐约可见 )
3. letter => close-up,stamp(Penny Black 黑便士)(1840) => (ring ring),a women answer a landline telephone => lens shift (with wire)
4. (toot) shift to a booth(电话亭 Type K1), he is talking, bus go through (1960 AEC Routemaster) => lens shift
5. she is talking by a big mobilephone (1980) => lens shift
6. (click) he hang out phone, walk out booth(Type K6), take a bus (ALX 400), bus go far-away
7. he sleep with smile => black

They argued

1. black => (ringringringgggg) he wake, on bus
2. iphone?? (20?0), email pop up continually => he open app => chat history(boring) => he call => close-up icon
3. icon => she answer the call => (In AR) he argued with her => close-up subtitle, clothes and subtitle change rapidly.
4. massive subtitle <= many times => massvie notifications
5. he is arguing (in AR calling), she close camera => her face disappear and become ‘sound only’ on screens in a dark room
6. (Snap 开关声) light up, his back, looks sad. (room is extremly simple) => (sigh) black

communication of spirit

1. face, he opend a box
2. he’s writing a poem
3. fold a paper plane => fly to earth